Thursday, 25 October 2012

The famous people in my country


In my country, I have one people is very famous. That he is famous in scientist. His name is Joy livian. Do you know why is he become famous? Because In my country, when some people want to know or want to have something that is very difference from other things they will be go to his house and ask about something that they want like if someone want to have a magic carpet, he will be do it for him or her. But about something that he doesn't know what to do, he will search to find it. He is famous just in my country. And then I want to tell you about his achievements. His achievements are magic carpets, flying animals and a lot of more that I can't count. He is very important too my country because of him if we don't have him, my country can't be have a lot of mystery things and especially is my country can't be great than another country. And people in my country can be famous by em... like they are the kind people or they can be the famous doctors in my country.

2 comments:

  1. You need a lot of grammar improvements.

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  2. I want to put lots of grammar too but I'm not good at grammar

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